Tuesday, September 6, 2011

Dead and Resurrected Characters

I think all my characters are zombies, or vampires, or something undead and permanent.

See, I can't let go of them. I wrote this blurb, which I'll post for you to torture your eyes on, back in 2002. That's, like, TEN YEARS AGO. Almost. The date stamp says September 5, 2002.

Man, that's weird. It's like the anniversary date for the birth of this character. I wonder if there's something in this season that puts this shit in my head every year, because I have never forgotten Marty.

What's even weirder is I haven't messed with this story, with Marty, in forever, in YEARS, but last night that little bastard with no warning dove into my worms and started digging and throwing dirt until I had to get up and let him write a stupid outline for the stupid book so he'd shut his stupid mouth and let me stupid sleep.

Which I didn't sleep, of course, not a drop or a wink, not last night. It's like that when you see your next book waiting to be writ.

This guy, Marty, he's a blurb. He's a ghost. He's an undead boy with a big-ass knife and he will not let me forget him.

Queue the scene, stage left, hit the music.



Working Title: The Idear
It could have been something he'd imagined, one of those pipe dreams kids come up with late at night, under the covers with a friend and a flashlight. He'd played it over and over in his head until it seemed real enough. And here he was, holding a knife as big as his arm. The blade alone reached from his elbow to his wrist. Holding it near his face to see that yep, sure enough, it's real all right, real as Jeannie's tits.

"Hey, Sugar, what you got?" That was Gus. He was the leader of this little troop, six boys in all, and they called Marty Jameson Sugar because that's what his mom had called him once.

Marty hated being called Sugar.

Marty stuffed the knife under his shirt. The blade was rusty and it didn't look sharp. He'd take care of that later. "Nothing," Marty answered. "I ain't got nothing."

"Liar!" Gus said. "I saw you put something under your shirt, sugar-boy, let's s—"

"I ain't got nothing!" Marty said. He turned and put his feet under him, running despite the danger of having a blade so close to his heart (his mom would belt him for sure if she caught him running with a knife).

Marty was faster than the other boys—except for Danny, he was the oldest—and Marty sprinted around a stack of old tires, between two stripped-out Volkswagons, and ducked beneath a tower of fifty-gallon oil drums. He clambered inside one of the barrels before Danny rounded the corner behind him. The rest followed, all running past Marty. Silent as a rabbit, Marty waited until he heard Gus scream, "He went over to the crane!" before climbing out of his hole.

Marty drew the knife from his shirt. The blade was wide and long, a true Bowie knife, with a busted fake-ivory handle that had broken halfway down the length of the grip. Marty tucked the knife into his belt so that it both looked and felt like a sword on his hip. He raced home, stopping only once to lift a piece of corrugated tin and claim a beat-up wire grinder brush he spotted. He could use that to clean the blade.

***

The next day it rained, huge drops that fell straight-down without wind and without thunder. Marty sat in the attic next to the window as if beneath a waterfall, hidden behind clear sheets of water as the rain rolled over the eaves. He sat in a toddler's chair, one he'd found crammed into the corner of the attic when they'd moved in a year ago. The wicker seat was chewed-through, and the sharp corners of the broken straws sometimes poked him, but its legs were strong enough that Marty could lean back as he worked. The overhead light had long ago burned out and never been replaced. So Marty sat near the window. The cascading rain somehow amplified the light here.

Marty's fingers bled from where the wire brush had stabbed him; the wild-haired brush wasn't designed to be held, it was designed to spin on a grinder. He had taken a piece of his jeans (the part left over after his mom had made cut-offs) and used the fabric to pad his hands. It worked well, and during the past few hours, Marty had scraped most of the rust from the blade, and saved the rest of his fingers.

According to his mom's scale, the one she kept hidden beneath the bathroom towels so she didn't have to look at it, the knife weighed over a pound. The weight sat heavy in Marty's lap.

In his pocket was another weight, this one a few ounces he'd lifted from the knife-drawer in the kitchen: a battered and chipped whetstone.

Marty held the knife up in the shimmering light. "You're almost clean," he said. "Then I'll put an edge on you that'll cut through glass."

***



How about you? Any new or resurrected idears yet?

- Eric

PS. This blurb was used during a blogfest at some point. Just saying.

10 comments:

Cynthia Lee said...

I haven't had a resurrected idea in a while. I love those and I wish one would waft my way.

Good job with your excerpt, by the way. :)

Bane of Anubis said...

I tend to push ahead to the new ideas and let the rest slip into the abyss (where they won't pester my brain).

Nice excerpt in many ways.

Wine and Words said...

and when she lit him on fire it was like the fourth of July. He hopped around like Brer Rabbit on caffeine, with colored sparks coming from his ass. She should have been horrified, or at least worried. But she hadn't the skin for it...worn as her sediments were.

Wine and Words said...

That's all I got.

Wine and Words said...

For now...

Roland D. Yeomans said...

I have a linked universe of stories where the secondary characters cross over from one novel to another with a different facet of their character coming to light in each one. Evil Maija, Naughty Fallen, mysterious Elu, the eerie Turquoise Woman.

I guess in a way that is resurrecting them, isn't it? LOL. Roland

Donna Hole said...

Yeah I got a couple stuff I'm working on. But just one sentence or two at a time. A couple weeks ago I got real involved in the Cyborg Fairytale, stayed up all day and all night; got quite a ways into it actually.

Then I had to go to bed, and other things came up, and its still waiting for the next sequence. *sighs*

I hope you got a lot further with this excerpt Eric. Its a beauty, worth seeing through.

.......dhole

Damyanti said...

Would love to see these characters in action at the The Rule of Three Blogfest !

Our shared-world could do with a few of these resurrected people.

Have you signed up yet? :)

L. Diane Wolfe said...

I have a at least a hundred short stories/novellas/started novels, just waiting for me to return...

Milo James Fowler said...

Wow -- Marty's last line there, that's one I won't be forgetting anytime soon.

Funny you mention resurrecting older work. I'm doing just that this week with one of my favorite western characters for a story called "Harbinger" -- currently under serious revision.